Why would the king of portugal be talking to him in Washington D.C
Because there was no castle prop!Right, Jillian?
you know jillian you could always just make a castle
is it good
there are some mistakes
say he instead of amerigo vespucci, or even say amerigo and vespucci
I see it.
That's weird! all I see is a Lego block in the middle
I thought he did.
alot of misspellings
there is a background alex!
Maggelen was hit with a lance, not a poisoned arrow. That was Ponce De Leon.
it said in the encyclopedia that he was shot in the leg.
HEY HEY HEY!! GO ON LIT OS AT 8:00 !! OK
How did you get the letters to be lowercase!!(caps, then shift????!!)??
He is hanging off the rail. He should be inside.
I know he did not die in Arkansas.... the United States is about 300 years later, Ryan.. Check your facts and correct.
it said that in the book i read about them
Oh, I see... he died in a location that centuries later would become Arkansas... you may want to rephrase that... sounds like he died in the state of Arkansas!
because I didn't know what to do!
caitilin less facts in the one slide
Alex it means he died in 1521 ( the year) and in Havana, Cuba ( the place )
you misspelled America, add a period or coma in "what are they lets here them'' and here is spelled "hear" in that sentence, and rob is spelled wrong in the 7th panel.
in the 6th panel you put 3 L's in really, you only put 1 r in terrible, and you put 2 L's at the end of successful. You was your editor?
On the 3rd slide you should make him smaller, because it looks like he is a giant compared to the other people. Also on the second slide you should put not only the year he was born but what month and where.
On the 5th and 6th slide you should make the boats bigger, because they would not sail across the ocean in little tiny row boats,and why are they dancing on the 6th slide? Nice comic though.............. :)
he is to tall