Alexander W.
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you misspelled America, add a period or coma in "what are they lets here them'' and here is spelled "hear" in that sentence, and rob is spelled wrong in the 7th panel.
Sep 7, 2010
Eoghan H.
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in the 6th panel you put 3 L's in really, you only put 1 r in terrible, and you put 2 L's at the end of successful. You was your editor?
Sierra Danielle H. - It shows up nicely. I really like the map in the background.
Allyson S. - Very cool.
Alexander W. - you misspelled America, add a period or coma in "what are they lets here them'' and here is spelled "hear" in that sentence, and rob is spelled wrong in the 7th panel.
Eoghan H. - in the 6th panel you put 3 L's in really, you only put 1 r in terrible, and you put 2 L's at the end of successful. You was your editor?