Allyson S.
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On the 3rd slide you should make him smaller, because it looks like he is a giant compared to the other people. Also on the second slide you should put not only the year he was born but what month and where.
Sep 7, 2010
Allyson S.
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On the 5th and 6th slide you should make the boats bigger, because they would not sail across the ocean in little tiny row boats,and why are they dancing on the 6th slide? Nice comic though.............. :)
Sierra Danielle H. - Why are they so tall? So skinny? Well, at least on the first slide.
Sierra Danielle H. - Is the last slide appropriate for school?
Sierra Danielle H. - Why on the last slide, did you put the same word starting a sentance two times! The word is he!
Allyson S. - Why do they look so....so tall?
Allyson S. - Why did the background on the first slide just turn purple with an x?
David O. - ponce de león is to tall
Allyson S. - On the 3rd slide you should make him smaller, because it looks like he is a giant compared to the other people. Also on the second slide you should put not only the year he was born but what month and where.
Allyson S. - On the 5th and 6th slide you should make the boats bigger, because they would not sail across the ocean in little tiny row boats,and why are they dancing on the 6th slide?
Nice comic though.............. :)
Ryan $. - he is to tall