Emily A.

Emily A.
Pixton Comic
- Pixton Comic
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- Sep 2, 2010
- Alexander W. - on the 4th panel dont let the speech bubble cover maggelan's head
  - Sep 7, 2010
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- - Hayden F. - where are the indian's bows
    - Sep 7, 2010
  - Allyson S. - On the 3rd slide you should put a background in and not just green,also on the 2nd slide the fist speech bubble is kind of not in the slide all of the way, and the 2nd slide is covering the teacher. Also on the 5th slide you should put men in the boats and maybe even make them look a little bigger. and I don't think Indians would be wearing pants.
    I like it though.............. :)
    - Sep 7, 2010
  - Eoghan H. - on the 3 panel his hand is backwards and he was only a teenager when he became interested in sailing, so he would not have a bushy beard. Also, in the 4th panel which king is he talking to, because when the Portuguese king refused him he went to Spain where he was accepted. and only 1 of the 5 ships returned to Spain after going around the world, and the ship that left during the journey went back to Spain not Portugal, and on the last panel you spelled sugar with an E. and it did not end in the Philippines, he just died there and then the Victoria sailed back as Magellan's only remaining ship. and you spelled doesn't wrong, it is spelled dosent in your comic. plus, the Indians don't whack there enemies with arrows, they should have bows. and you put antives on the last panel, and you spelled fascinated like facsinated on the second panel and (sigh) you spelled little wrong on the second panel. you spelled it like litlle
    Eoghan H. - on the 3 panel his hand is backwards and he was only a teenager when he became interested in sailing, so he would not have a bushy beard. Also, in the 4th panel which king is he talking to, because when the Portuguese king refused him he went to Spain where he was accepted. and only 1 of the 5 ships returned to Spain after going around the world, and the ship that left during the journey went back to Spain not Portugal, and on the last panel you spelled sugar with an E. and it did not end in the Philippines, he just died there and then the Victoria sailed back as Magellan's more... less...
    - Sep 10, 2010
  - Eoghan H. - nice job though...................
    - Nov 11, 2010
- Eoghan H. - on the fist panel his hand is backward
  - Feb 2, 2011