Allyson S.
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You spelled poisoned wrong and why did the girl with the purple shirt on change pants in the last slide,she was wearing pants in the first slide, and then in the last slide she changed to shorts.
Sep 7, 2010
Anabella R.
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nobody caught that mistake ally. you revised it!!!!!
Anabella R. - what do you guys think?
☎William C. C. - It's funny, but make your charecters taller. Look at mine and make them as tall (if not taller) as me.
Anabella R. - maybe, thanks for the comment
Allyson S. - Yeah, it looks like they would have to jump to reach the door handle.
Hayden F. - in panel 9 you spelled poisoned wrong
Allyson S. - You spelled poisoned wrong and why did the girl with the purple shirt on change pants in the last slide,she was wearing pants in the first slide, and then in the last slide she changed to shorts.
Anabella R. - nobody caught that mistake ally. you revised it!!!!!
Ryan $. - the people are too small
Eoghan H. - it doesn't show enough stuff from the ponce de leon time
Ryan $. - 5th pannel: that does not look like a boat!!!
Anabella R. - i tried! ;)