nicolas P. - The things that are the same is that we all wrote our body paragraphs then wrote the other two, and the differents are we didn't really plan it out all we did was write the paragraphs and the made a good copy after profreading it. (Nov 20, 2009)

Tanner o. - (Nov 20, 2009)

Mr. Spadafora - Actually we did pplan it out. Remember, you had specific things you had to write about in each paragraph. That is planning, when you know what you are writing about before you write it! (Nov 20, 2009)

Keisha H. - we did thst t-chart with the ideas of our topic (Nov 20, 2009)

Mr. Spadafora - good point keisha (Nov 20, 2009)

nick c. - this is verv similar to what we do in class (Nov 20, 2009)

mikhaila c. - This website just went into more detail of what you told us about writtin essays. (Nov 20, 2009)

Mr. Spadafora - thanks Mikhaila! (Nov 20, 2009)

Tanner o. - it explains alot of the things that you said for us to do in our essay like dont use the statement "I think that" or "I think this" it also esplains the different ways we can brainstorm our ideas and facts. This explains the propers ways to write a thesis statement and we worked alot on how to write a good opening paragraph. It also explains also how to write proper transitions between sentences that i have never really worked on or thought about very much. I think that that information gave me many ideas on how to write my future essays. Tanner (Nov 20, 2009)

Keisha H. - like makhaila siad that the web site explains it in more detail (Nov 20, 2009)

Mr. Spadafora - Tanner, thanks for your indepth and thoughtful response! ;-} (Nov 20, 2009)

adam a. - what i thik this artical was really simmaural to what you told use this artical was an expaned vertion of what you told and example of what was simmural is the part of the artial that same when you told us to use a thesaurs to make some of are boring words soud better anthor example of what was the same when it said i the artcal is when you we got into eddting most of the stuff you said were the same same the only differing in the eddting was to use words from differnt laugual (Nov 20, 2009)

Mr. Spadafora - Thank you Adam! (Nov 20, 2009)

dylan p. - i think the artical is alot similer then it is diferent. things like we shood note down at lest 3 diferent notes that will help us when we make are body parigrafs. i dident rile find meny diferentsis in the artical and rile i gust think its more indepth then what we have lernd. (Nov 20, 2009)

cori r. - One thing that is similiar from this and the essays we all wrote in class is that we all planned it out first .One difference is that we didn't creat a title page for our essay. (Nov 20, 2009)

tyler w. - it is very similar to what we have been working on in the class we have been writing 5 paragraphs and also writing a thises statment and doing lots of proof reading its easyer when someone else dose it like a teacher or a friend. My eassays will only keep getting better. (Nov 20, 2009)