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jillian b.Pixton Comic-
Allyson S. - Cool. - Show 2 more replies...
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Eoghan H. - Why would the king of portugal be talking to him in Washington D.C -
Caitlin M. - Because there was no castle prop!Right, Jillian?
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Natasha F. - you know jillian you could always just make a castle
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Natasha F.Pixton Comic
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Natasha F. - is it good
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jose l. - there are some mistakes -
Eoghan H. - say he instead of amerigo vespucci, or even say amerigo and vespucci
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Alexander W.Pixton Comic-
Alexander W. - i dont see ANYTHING!
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Allyson S. - I see it.
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Alexander W. - That's weird! all I see is a Lego block in the middle
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Caitlin M. - SEE WHAT?
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hayden f.Pixton Comic-
Eoghan H. - In your fun fact you said " a explorer" instead of AN explorer
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Mr. Miller - Very creative! Correct your Puerto Rico and make that text in the black larger. -
Alexander W. - add a background on the 3rd panel.
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Sierra Danielle H. - I thought he did. -
Lynnlee R. - alot of misspellings
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Eoghan H. - there is a background alex!
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Eoghan H.Pixton Comic
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Mr. Miller - Love the map! Do you know how to get rid of the modern city in the background? You can unlock the set and delete that portion or just cover it up with trees.
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ryan $. - you could put a backround in your fun fact -
Lynnlee R. - Maggelen was hit with a lance, not a poisoned arrow. That was Ponce De Leon.
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Eoghan H. - it said in the encyclopedia that he was shot in the leg.
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ryan $. - HEY HEY HEY!! GO ON LIT OS AT 8:00 !! OK
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jeffrey f.Pixton Comic-
Sierra Danielle H. - Hey! Remember your periods.Yea has incorrect spelling. Some words need to be capitalized. Over all great job.
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Bianca D. - umm all the words are capalized right?? cause it makes em captilized -
Sierra Danielle H. - Look further.
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Caitlin M. - How did you get the letters to be lowercase!!(caps, then shift????!!)??
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Sierra Danielle H. - He is hanging off the rail. He should be inside.
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ryan $.Pixton Comic
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Bianca D. - an illness or a combat wound which?? do they not know??
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Allyson S. - You should put a period on the 5th slide, in the pink part, and on the 7th slide you should put a period also in the pink part, and something else in stead of just putting the map in the background.
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Eoghan H. - In the 7th square you should put his route in the background.
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Mr. Miller - I know he did not die in Arkansas.... the United States is about 300 years later, Ryan.. Check your facts and correct.
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ryan $. - it said that in the book i read about them
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Mr. Miller - Oh, I see... he died in a location that centuries later would become Arkansas... you may want to rephrase that... sounds like he died in the state of Arkansas!
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Caitlin M.Pixton Comic
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Alexander W. - in your facts i dont undrerstand when you say "he died 1521 havana , cuba". try to fix that.
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hayden f. - why did you put facts in twice
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david o. - why did you put the same facts twice. -
Caitlin M. - because I didn't know what to do!
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Bianca D. - caitilin less facts in the one slide
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Caitlin M. - Alex it means he died in 1521 ( the year) and in Havana, Cuba ( the place )
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david o.Pixton Comic
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Sierra Danielle H. - It shows up nicely. I really like the map in the background.
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Allyson S. - Very cool.
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Alexander W. - you misspelled America, add a period or coma in "what are they lets here them'' and here is spelled "hear" in that sentence, and rob is spelled wrong in the 7th panel.
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Eoghan H. - in the 6th panel you put 3 L's in really, you only put 1 r in terrible, and you put 2 L's at the end of successful. You was your editor?
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Colton B.Pixton Comic-
Sierra Danielle H. - Why are they so tall? So skinny? Well, at least on the first slide.
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Sierra Danielle H. - Is the last slide appropriate for school?
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Sierra Danielle H. - Why on the last slide, did you put the same word starting a sentance two times! The word is he!
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Allyson S. - Why do they look so....so tall?
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Allyson S. - Why did the background on the first slide just turn purple with an x?
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david o. - ponce de león is to tall
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Allyson S. - On the 3rd slide you should make him smaller, because it looks like he is a giant compared to the other people. Also on the second slide you should put not only the year he was born but what month and where.
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Allyson S. - On the 5th and 6th slide you should make the boats bigger, because they would not sail across the ocean in little tiny row boats,and why are they dancing on the 6th slide?
Nice comic though.............. :)
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ryan $. - he is to tall
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Emily A.Pixton Comic-
Alexander W. - on the 4th panel dont let the speech bubble cover maggelan's head
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hayden f. - where are the indian's bows
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Allyson S. - On the 3rd slide you should put a background in and not just green,also on the 2nd slide the fist speech bubble is kind of not in the slide all of the way, and the 2nd slide is covering the teacher. Also on the 5th slide you should put men in the boats and maybe even make them look a little bigger. and I don't think Indians would be wearing pants.
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Eoghan H. - on the 3 panel his hand is backwards and he was only a teenager when he became interested in sailing, so he would not have a bushy beard. Also, in the 4th panel which king is he talking to, because when the Portuguese king refused him he went to Spain where he was accepted. and only 1 of the 5 ships returned to Spain after going around the world, and the ship that left during the journey went back to Spain not Portugal, and on the last panel you spelled sugar with an E. and it did not end in the Philippines, he just died there and then the Victoria sailed back as Magellan's more...
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Eoghan H. - nice job though...................
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Eoghan H. - on the fist panel his hand is backward
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jose l.Pixton Comic
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Allyson S.Pixton Comic
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Allyson S. - I made it better.....how is it?
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Allyson S. - Please reply.........
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Anabella R. - you might want to delete more text, or
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ryan $. - you should make the text size smaller
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Allyson S. - Okay.
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Alexander W. - white text coler blends in with the background! Make it a darker color!
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Allyson S. - Really? I tried all of the colors, and white was the easiest to see.
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Anabella R.Pixton Comic
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Anabella R. - what do you guys think?
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☎William C. C. - It's funny, but make your charecters taller. Look at mine and make them as tall (if not taller) as me. -
Anabella R. - maybe, thanks for the comment
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Allyson S. - Yeah, it looks like they would have to jump to reach the door handle.
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hayden f. - in panel 9 you spelled poisoned wrong
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Allyson S. - You spelled poisoned wrong and why did the girl with the purple shirt on change pants in the last slide,she was wearing pants in the first slide, and then in the last slide she changed to shorts.
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Anabella R. - nobody caught that mistake ally. you revised it!!!!!
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ryan $. - the people are too small
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Eoghan H. - it doesn't show enough stuff from the ponce de leon time
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ryan $. - 5th pannel: that does not look like a boat!!!
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Anabella R. - i tried! ;)
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Bianca D.Pixton Comic
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Alexander W. - On the first panel i think you should make a background
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Alexander W. - make it all the same size text exceptr fr the title.
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Allyson S. - You should make your name smaller on the tittle, and what in th world is that thing falling from the sky, it doesn't make any sense.
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Eoghan H. - WAY to hard to understand
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Sierra Danielle H.Pixton Comic
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ryan $. - the text cuts his head off in the second frame
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Allyson S. - It's kind of confusing that you started out with facts, and then begun to make your pixton person start saying the facts, and why when your person starts saying the facts there are two giant fish jumping in front of her. Also you should put a background on that same slide.
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ryan $. - his arms are huge in the third frame
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Sierra Danielle H. - Puffy shirt!
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jillian b. - awesome!
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Sierra Danielle H. - Ally the slide is sopposed to not have a background. I LIKE THE FISH!
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Eoghan H. - his arms sometimes look disproportional to his body. Also, you say runned instead of ran
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Eoghan H. - the text is almost illegible
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Lynnlee R.Pixton Comic
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☎William C. C. - Pretty good.
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Lynnlee R. - thanks. i can't figure out how to turn it in though
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Sierra Danielle H. - I think publishing it is enough!
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☎William C. C. - Search for a something Mr.Miller posted. When found, click on Miller's name. You will find yourself at many pages of posted things by him. You will then find the note he posted in wich your looking for, with "Turn In" on it. Thank you for your time.
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☎William C. C. - Good for you.
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Sierra Danielle H. - Where? Pixton?
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☎William C. C. - No, Edmodo.
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Lynnlee R. - still can't figure it out.
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☎William C. C. - I literally just told you how and you still don't understand?
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Sierra Danielle H. - SORRY!
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☎William C. C. - Not you.
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Allyson S. - Lynlee, you should put a background and maybe a character on the 3rd slide instead of just a big paragraph.
I really like it though............ :)
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Paige M.Pixton Comic-
Mr. Miller - Paige, see if you can get another image behind....
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Paige M. - Ok. And I was wondering.. How do I turn in my project?
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Paige M. - Nevermind. I figured it out.
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☎William C. C. - since you figured it out, paige, lynlee needs help.
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Bianca D. - yeah and can you adjust the bubbles on the last slide i read it at first likei know then wow thats coll
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☎William C. C. - Coll?
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jeffrey f. - hernando cortez was franiciso pizzaro,s second cousin
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Paige M. - Actually i dint figure it out. :(
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Natasha F. - you spelled lynnnlee with anly one n
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Mr. Miller - And you spelled it with 3... what gives?
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☎William C. C. - hey,whocares how i spell lynlee?(besides lynlee)
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Eoghan H. - Again! lynnlee has 2 n's
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Natasha F. - i know on her folder last year it only had 1
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Kyle C.Pixton Comic -
ryan $.Pixton Comic
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Allyson S. - Cool!
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