Archie j. - well realy its all about what order we wrote it in. i says that u should wright your 3 body paragraphs. we usualy start with the startying paragraph. (4 hours ago)

Ryan H. - ya its about the order we write in. It says to start by writing the body(normal) them write the concluson(i do it last) and then write the intro(i do that second) (4 hours ago)

nicolas P. - The things that are the same is that we all wrote our body paragraphs then wrote the other two, and the differents are we didn't really plan it out all we did was write the paragraphs and the made a good copy after profreading it. (5 hours ago)

Tanner o. - (4 hours ago)

Mr. Spadafora - Actually we did pplan it out. Remember, you had specific things you had to write about in each paragraph. That is planning, when you know what you are writing about before you write it! (4 hours ago)

Keisha H. - we did thst t-chart with the ideas of our topic (4 hours ago)

Mr. Spadafora - good point keisha (4 hours ago)

nick c. - this is verv similar to what we do in class (4 hours ago)

mikhaila c. - This website just went into more detail of what you told us about writtin essays. (4 hours ago)

Mr. Spadafora - thanks Mikhaila! (4 hours ago)

Tanner o. - it explains alot of the things that you said for us to do in our essay like dont use the statement "I think that" or "I think this" it also esplains the different ways we can brainstorm our ideas and facts. This explains the propers ways to write a thesis statement and we worked alot on how to write a good opening paragraph. It also explains also how to write proper transitions between sentences that i have never really worked on or thought about very much. I think that that information gave me many ideas on how to write my future essays. Tanner (4 hours ago)

Keisha H. - like makhaila siad that the web site explains it in more detail (4 hours ago)

Mr. Spadafora - Tanner, thanks for your indepth and thoughtful response! ;-} (4 hours ago)

adam a. - what i thik this artical was really simmaural to what you told use this artical was an expaned vertion of what you told and example of what was simmural is the part of the artial that same when you told us to use a thesaurs to make some of are boring words soud better anthor example of what was the same when it said i the artcal is when you we got into eddting most of the stuff you said were the same same the only differing in the eddting was to use words from differnt laugual (4 hours ago)

Mr. Spadafora - Thank you Adam! (4 hours ago)

dylan p. - i think the artical is alot similer then it is diferent. things like we shood note down at lest 3 diferent notes that will help us when we make are body parigrafs. i dident rile find meny diferentsis in the artical and rile i gust think its more indepth then what we have lernd. (4 hours ago)

cori r. - One thing that is similiar from this and the essays we all wrote in class is that we all planned it out first .One difference is that we didn't creat a title page for our essay. (4 hours ago)

tyler w. - it is very similar to what we have been working on in the class we have been writing 5 paragraphs and also writing a thises statment and doing lots of proof reading its easyer when someone else dose it like a teacher or a friend. My eassays will only keep getting better. (4 hours ago)

Mrs. Tummarello - The third graders are learning about habitat, structures and adaptation. (5 hours ago)

Jacqueline M. - Ready. (8 hours ago)

yolanda g. - hey lets see if this work by writting a long sentence. (8 hours ago)

Elijah R. - my favorite dessert is icecream (5 hours ago)

Lesly A. - My favorite dessert is churros (5 hours ago)

arianna c. - my favorite dessert is cheesecake (5 hours ago)

Brandon C. - cake i likethe cake with icecreem (4 hours ago)

Josue G. - i like dougnuts (4 hours ago)

emma j. - my favorite is icecream. (4 hours ago)

Valerie W. - My favorite dessert is Cheesecake. (1 hour ago)

Jahmari S. - my favorite dessert is popsicles because the come in good flavors (48 minutes ago)

Mrs. Concklin - Friday at the PEP Assembly! Do you think the 6th graders have a chance??? Maybe- you did have the most food! (21 hours ago)